Hi,
I have been trying to find somewhere to get some feedback on some short Star Wars scripts that I wrote. Someone asked me to write a Star Wars script with more Darth Vader in it, so I duly obliged. Not sure if this is the right pace to put these but I would like to get some feedback. I can attach them as PDFs or as a google doc link. I'll try hte PDF here.
Please let me know what you think. I would love to get some feedback.
I have been trying to find somewhere to get some feedback on some short Star Wars scripts that I wrote. Someone asked me to write a Star Wars script with more Darth Vader in it, so I duly obliged. Not sure if this is the right pace to put these but I would like to get some feedback. I can attach them as PDFs or as a google doc link. I'll try hte PDF here.
Please let me know what you think. I would love to get some feedback.
